Poem
Movies
On tv you watch movies. But zombies and ghost are really spooky. Movies are sometimes cool, On the movie batman they have some tool’s.
When you watch transformer, you see a performer. The movie’s screen is big, some people wears a wig.
That’s all of my poem, if you play black op’s a guys name is called bowmen.
Nice use of rhyme in your poem Loto. You can use the layout of your text to help emphasise it. Finish each line with the rhyming word. for example
ReplyDeleteWhen you watch transformer
you see a performer.
The movie’s screen is big,
some people wears a wig.
See how it makes the rhyme stand out more?
Mrs Parker
Thank you mrs for the advice. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you mrs for the advice. :)
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