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Tuesday 9 June 2015

Balloon Game.

Balloon game recount
Guess what room 7 students and Mrs Raj did together out at Glenbrae school court,
we blew up a balloon!!! Mrs Raj blew it. When we saw her blow it we were excited to play with it. We played that game for a reason. To work as a team. I was shocked because the balloon was big.
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Mrs Raj said the boys will go first. We got into a little circle. We held hands, if we let go of our hands we had to start again. When we hit it the balloon it went swish, swoosh! The boys and
I  were screaming and shouting. We were like animals. I was about to hit the balloon with my head but Danny got to it before i got to it. He is tall. Pelenise is too short that’s why he couldn’t get it. We were amazed! The boys had their turn. Now it was the girls turn, after about 3 times the balloon went on the grass.  Pop went the balloon!


At the end of the game we were jumping, running and falling on the ground. We were fun filled.
The things i found difficult in the game was to lift up our hands.
The things i found easy at the game was to keep the balloon in the air.
The thing i found funny was that we were all shouting and jumping around.

6 comments:

  1. Hi Loto,
    I like your reflection at the end where you describe what was easy and difficult. Remember to get a friend to proof read your work for spelling and grammar.

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  2. Nice work Loto, you have a lot of descriptive words in here.
    Nice hook in too!
    It was a really fun and competitive game, wasn't it?

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  4. Hi Loto I love how you put a hook in and you have a lot of detail and describing words. Keep up the good work.

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  5. Loto i like your balloon recount because it has more detail and it sounds
    so fun.

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  6. good one Loto you have describe how did your adverb and you added more detail how did you feel for your conclusion and even descriptive words. Nice work Loto

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