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Thursday 27 August 2015

Narrative Story.

Narrative Story.



It was a sunshiny day never night. There was two boys named Herobrine and Loki. Herobrine has short brown hair, gold eyes, white teeth and he is very tall. Loki is the villain. He has very black hair, he is the same size as rusky. He has got blue eyes, and white teeth as well.

There were two brothers at that time. Herobrine was invited to a party. Herobrine had slept at the party.
When he woke up he ended up in a humongous desert. He was dropped of by LOKI.

Loki was trying to start the engine but there were no more gas. It wasn’t to long when Herobrine had an idea.Herobrine said “lets not fight or anything, just be a happy family”. Loki has no choice but to kill him.

Herobrine had stand up for himself and said “please stop we have done lots together, we played together, we sing together and we dance together”. What do you say. Loki have given up and said “we are back”. So Loki had a good job. They lived happily ever after. The lesson learnt was to never fight just keep everybody safe.      

2 comments:

  1. Wow Loto I like your work because you added a lot of details. Good boy

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  2. Thank you danny for your lovey comment.

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